Site icon New Jetpack Site

Esmes Indie Highlights/SPFBO: Stolen Magic by Marina Finlayson

This book is part of Fantasy Factions grouping and doesn’t have any feedback yet.

Plot:

The book starts out with a robbery taking place at the Mayor’s manor, Lexi, the main character, is breaking into his house to steal something from him. He just fired one of her friends who’s pregnant and really needed the job – so as revenge she’s taking stuff from his house. She decides on an altarpiece of Posieden since he’s a “water shaper” and tosses it into the bay – her friend Syl thinks this is a really bad decision but Lexi does it anyway.

Later on, when Lexi helps find two kids who got lost in the woods using her ability to link with animals, Jake Steele, (a high ranking person in society) figures out that she’s not simply a “human” and has some sort of powers. Jake is convinced that Lexi is up to something and is keeping a close eye on Lexi, making her life difficult.

Syl eventually gets herself into trouble and Lexi has to figure out a way to help her – vampires, lion shifters and fireshapers ensue.

Final Score: 6/10


Characters:

Final Score: 5/10

 


World Building:

Final Score: 7/10


Pacing/Prose/Tone:

This isn’t exactly an action filled book, but the pacing was okay. It read pretty quickly since there were no info dumps or long exposition of stuff, the world building was slowly revealed through the book.

It had a much lighter tone than the stuff I’ve read recently, so that was a nice change.

The writing was simpler with the prose getting out of the way of the story. This is sort of an urban fantasy set in an alternate world, so modern terminology was used frequently.

Pacing Final Score: 7/10

Writing Final Score: 8/10


Originality:

I’ve seen a lot of shape-shifting and elemental magic – but I don’t usually see them together.

Final Score: 6/10 


Audience:


 

Total Final Score: 39/60 or 6./10 or 3 stars

Exit mobile version