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Esmes Indie Highlights/SPFBO: The Heart of Stone by Ben Galley

I was excited to read this one, I knew a little bit about it before I picked it up, I knew that it had a golem as one of the main characters which is what got me so interested – I love non human POV’s.


Bingo: Self Published, 2017, Non-human protag


 

Characters:


Final Score: 9/10


Plot:

There’s a civil war, the boy Kings loyalists, and the rebels who are displeased with the leadership and want a better life. The war has been going on for 9 years and it’s been a blood bath. The country of Hartlund is poor, starving, sick, and tired of the war, both sides are desperate for an end to the fighting. What I really loved about this book is that you get to see both sides of the war, and the gritty realism of the lower class soldiers getting shit on and used up was really well done. It did a great job of showing both sides of a war have great costs, and that there are decent people on each side. There’s actually a decent amount of material in the book that makes you pause and reflect.

Final Score: 8.5/10

 


Worldbuilding:

You get two maps in the beginning of the book, a world map and a close in of the country of Hartlund. The characters march with their armies through some of the country side, so you can look at the map if you want to. Most of the plot takes place in Hartlund although there’s mention of the other countries within the world. There is a set religion in this world, and their god is known as The Architect, and their holy script is known as The Manual. There wasn’t a ton of info around this, but you do get drip fed the culture and religion as the book goes on.

This book also did something similar to what Sanderson did in Stormlight Archives – common animals were replaced by magical counterparts with a common set of biological features. In Stormlight most of the animals have crustacean like features, in this book most animals have a combination of scales, fur, and back ridges.

There are also different kinds of golems, and the material they’re made out of makes a big difference, for instance wood golems tend to rot which drives them mad.

The setting is in the north where the countryside is cold, wet, and unforgiving in the wind.

There’s something called old magic, which is mostly feared and thought not to exist anymore. Most people didn’t even know there were still golems in the world, and Task is one of the last. There’s also a more common type of magic that lets people do different things. Glimpses, Gazers, and Blinders can all do different sorts of magic, a lot of it revolving around getting in peoples heads. This book has a decent amount of magical elements, but it’s nothing like Brandon Sandersons stuff, it’s more toned down than that.

Final Score: 8.5/10


Pacing:

I couldn’t put this book down, the pace was pretty quick and there were a bunch of battles and action scenes, the book is almost 500 pages and I think I finished in less than 36 hours of picking it up.

Pacing Final Score: 9/10

Writing Final Score: 9/10


Originality:

It’s not common to get non human pov’s, and when you do they are often elves. This is one of two books I’ve ever read with a golem like character, he was unique and fresh and I loved him.

Final Score: 9/10

 


 

Audience:


Final Score: 53/60 or 8.83/10 or 5 stars on goodreads.

 

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